Rough Cut - Problems

We have filmed our opening sequence but have never used a tripod for that. The clips ended up being very shaky and in a few clips the camera lost its focus and we didn't check that straight away so we later had to re-film everything. However we decided to put all the clips together just to see how it flows and to see if anything has to be changed, improved or added. After putting everything together with the music we have showed the video to a couple of people, including our teacher and we the feedback we got was that there was too much footage of the two characters walking and nothing interesting happening. Also one very big mistake we made is we didn't make a storyboard or a floor plan so while filming we didn't really know what we were doing.